A short essay about a past or present relationship w/ anyone.

My Writing class asked to write a short essay about a past or present relationship, they asked to get into detail and really into depth. This is what i wrote, its not finished but yeah.. give me lots of feedback, i would really appreciate it. (the person i wrote about must know im talking about him) But seriously... FEEDBACK!

(ps. i have to read this out loud, and it probably sounds lousy until you actually hear me speaking.)

You make me the happiest girl alive.. you make me want to scream outside and look crazy, and scream out how much i feel for you! you dont understand how i feel.. i feel happy, chills, warm, safe with you.. i want to be in your arms as soon as i can and just kiss and hug you and close my eyes and smell your scent. Your a drug to me, i fean for you.. i get withdrawls when i only speak to you over the phone and not see you. I want you! i want you now.. your the only one who will cure this addiction i have towards you. You might be the one, The one i want to see every morning when i open my eyes and every night before i close my eyes. your amazing.
I go crazy when i dont hear you, i daydream about what it would be like if i was with you at the moment. I go crazy.. did you hear me?
Your the light that shines from my own sun. There are many reasons i wake up in the morning, and you are one of them.. <3 your the best, i never thought i would be this way towards any man. I never thought any other man would treat me the way that you do.. you know how to make me smile, how to make me into the happiest girl alive. There is just one thing missing.. the icing on the cake.. your touch.. i want to know how you caress me, how you touch my face and hands, how you kiss me. I close my eyes and wonder.. i feel my neck to try and feel your touch.. but its not possible..
it all feels like a dream, and i havent woken up to see that its all fake.. i cant believe myself.. i cant believe im with you.. (sorry this was an essay/short essay for my class, i havent gotten around to finishing it. but its due next week so i have to finish.. and i will post the rest when i do)